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05-09-2007, 05:45 PM
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| سنيب عندنا.. يا مرحبا يا مرحبا..  مو عشان سواد عيونك الترحيب.. بس لأنك الوحيد إلي أعرفه.. XD لمَ قريت من العنوان إنها HP فكشن تحمست أدخل و أقراها.. لأني من فترة نزل علي الوحي و قررت إني أشتري الرويات و أقراهم ؛).. أثريها مالها من HP إلا إسمها _^_.. أمزح ×_×.. و بعدين ليش كل هالكره لهاريوه حليله.. الصراحة أنا ما أكره و لا أحبه .. لكنه ما ينزل لي من زور.. <_>.. المهم قريت كل الأجزاء إلي نزلتيهم ^^ و عجبوني وااااااااااااااااااايد.. مع أني أعترف إني ما استوعبت كل شي ><.. أنا ما أقرا وايد إنجلش سووووو ما أقدر أحكم على الأسلوب._. << عيل شو يايبنج <_< فكرة القصة صدق صدق صدق حلوة.. و الأفكار و الأحداث بعد حلوة..  تحمست.. يا ترا وين بتفرينه هالمرة.. ما أوصيج عليه.. لعوزيه  ..شو بعد .. همممم.. البنت إلي في الجابتر الأول كشخة .. لووووووووووول.. -^- و سنيب المسكين بتيه عقدة من الأبوب.. بحرم يفتح أي باب  ..على فكرة هو شخصيتي المفضلة في HP .. << لا تعليق  و السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته.. التعديل الأخير تم بواسطة جيرلين ; 05-09-2007 الساعة 05:56 PM.      |
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06-09-2007, 12:53 AM
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تسلمين عالمرور يووووري..بس أمانه اقري القصة..بلييييز!! ----------- حبيبتي جيرلين مشكووورة عالمروووور... و اتمنى انج تكملين معااي لان مو باقي شي و أخلصها..^^ *~*~* _What the hell, what's going on now?? _ whispered snape to himself after he realized that he really didn't enter the pavilion with Aslan and the white witch , the same thing is happening to him again , he stood there among the shadows alone ; he thought instead of shouting why don't he run to reach something beyond , although it was quite a few dark , he was upset of everything that happened to him , snape desperately want to end all those things that kept running in his mind , those weird thoughts of no end to his misery , it was just like a scattered dream or a far off memory , he want to line the pieces up whether it was a dream or not ; almost against his will , he couldn't find a way out to get back to his room , Every time he tries to remember something, he found him self thinking about these awful nightmares in his mind's eye , snape walked and walked for almost half an hour, then he had a strange weird feeling about something wrong around him ; beyond the shadows , the creepy silence that makes you think that you've been watched in every step or move , The open – sound- air , the cold breeze of the thick fog , it was like walking in a deep dark cavern with no end . snape tried to look around ,he opened his eyes widely and felt his wand under his cloak , he walked a step or two further and saw a dim light , snape thought that he had finally reached something to get out he closed his eyes tight and opened it quickly to make sure that there is really a dim light not very far from his spot ; and he wasn't imagining things , he walked faster and faster focusing on what to do next ,as if the dim light was calling for him to come, unlike everybody snape wasn't thinking of who may cause that dim light , he was convincing himself that it might be a dream or his fantasy because he was exhausted ,suppose it was a dream how would he wake up ? , maybe he must wham against a barrier and sense the pain , well that's what came in his mind at the very moment though it wasn't necessary to jostle yourself with something firm, but maybe slap your cheeks ?!.... Snape kept wondering if he would see his house again ,he suddenly felt something puissance , like steam gravity pulling him down , everything was dark ; he couldn't do anything except gazing at the gloominess night , he sensed walls around him , snape neither screamed nor clutched to one of the wet walls ,the wet steam rubbed to his face. at the moment he fall from the edge ; everything was going in a slow-motion , he barely noticed that he was falling , well for a second he thought that he was flying high , it was a strange feeling , estimation from someone knowledgeable , intelligent and acute like snape , he might known that he was spilling into darkness to reach nowhere but emphatic decease , after several moments in struggling the nightmare and the dark , snape was waiting to reach the end of whatever he was going to , whether it was flying or falling ;it was the same to him, below to the bottom of the deepest peak ; snape was waiting patiently and thought : _Did I reached the ground , yet ??_ , and in no time he bump his head to the dusty floor , he couldn’t move a muscle , he thought that he was damaged badly and in any second he will die , he felt dizzy and he slowly opened his eyes to see where he was , because he smells something familiar , it was potions and some other botanical fluids in a phial fluids , Without a doubt ! , he got back to where he belong . Snape was laying on the dusty floor and slowly he gathered him self to his feet , the chamber wasn't so dark because of a few handles on the wooden table , it was nearly midnight Snape's black eyes was focusing on a wooden chair next to the wooden table , there was some old dusty books and some ablaze and extinguisher candles ,he looked a little higher to the shelves on the wall behind the table ,and he perceived the glassy bottles and different shaped phials , each phial was full of different colored and various liquids and a label on it with variant Hand- writings , snape couldn't be mistaken this time , these dusty bottles are potions ; and this chamber is his office , and that was his hand-writing on the labels . Snape immediately walked to reach the table and held a book laminating it ; he dropped it back and opened the other book and the other one ,then he sighed deeply , snape reached to the first shelf near him and latched a small brown phial a shook it , " I'm back !" said professor snape smiling warmly , this was real not just a fantasy he was standing in his office at Hogwarts , he returned the brown phial to its place ,And sat on the wooden chair behind the table . Snape leaned back on the chair trying to get some rest , behind him there was a window , he held his wand and waved it at the window , and it opened slowly , beckoning the gemmy moon reverse its bright light into his chamber. _ What a quite ,peaceful night !_ snape thought calmly closing hiswearisome eyes, after a few moment he opened his eyes again and gazed at a journal and whispered : " The daily prophet !, the twenty fifth of May ??" , without thinking snape flipped the journal harshly ,observing the pages " How come ?? it was November , and now it's May ?? am I really dreaming !!, won't that nightmare ever end !" he said in a hollow voice ,snape dropped the journal and thought again : _What am I going to do now ? it was night when I left and now it is ـــــــــ _ he couldn't think clearly because some one had burst his way into his office , for some reason snape jumped from his chair and thought : _ My ,my ….what's the point of making doors ?? that bloody man scared me to death , can't he just knock the door before entering ? _ . snape acted normally obscuring the fright on his face not admitting that he was scared from the man and he smiled at the man's face with the look that says : _ Oh , hello there , got ya ! You didn't scare with that trick! _ one second had passed and snape realized that the man was " Professor Flitwick !" sniffled snape gazing at him. Professor Flitwick knelt to his knees and lifted his pale face looking at snape breathless , And opened his mouth and said in a low voice " Deh _ Deahh__ ea __eateh __....." " For god's sake say something " said snape quickly ,the man couldn't catch his breath he was so frightened and tiered from running ,shouting , sprinting down into the dungeons in a hurry . snape who was watching the man closely waiting for an answer helped him to set on the nearest chair and closed the door behind him ,"Now , what is wrong , tell me!" said snape hastily . "DEATH EATERS are attacking the castle !" said Flitwick loudly as he jumped from the chair to the wooden door and clutch to the handle to open it . ''Quick Severus , you have to help us ! " , "I don't think so !" jeered snape as he closed the door again , Professor Flitwick looked at him in amazement. And after a short while came a loud thump from the door of snape's office, snape burst the door and came out hurtling , two young girls were standing in front of him . _ Hermione and Luna ?_ snape thought ," Oh , Mrs. Granger , thank goodness you’re here , quickly help professor Flitwick, I got to help fight the death eaters. " finished snape , Hermione looked at the poor professor Flitwick who was laying on the dusty floor and said ; " What happened to him ??" , " He had collapsed , take good care of him " ,the truth is that snape had stupefied Flitwick , snape run as fast as he could and Luna murmured with ; "We will take good care of him , don't worry professor!" , snape ignored them and whispered "Well that one hurts" he tried to reach the tower before someone catch him ,he saw the dark mark shining in the dark sky and he knew that Draco had succeeded his mission , so he run to help the Death Eaters in the fight , while professor Flitwick ; well the fact that snape had always hated him and he finally got the chance to beat him . Snape was running up the marble stair case , his black robe billowing behind him as ever , pulling his wand from under his cloak , he run straight through the cursed barrier as though it wasn't there , he was the defense against the dark arts teacher, he was in a hurry to chase after Malfoy and the rest of the death eaters who'd escaped up to the tower. Unlike any other teacher in Hogwarts , snape knew a spell to get through the cursed stairs ; And nothing can stop him . without any move snape pulled his wand high and shouted " Avata Kedavra " , a jet of green light shot from the end of snape's wand and hit Dumbledore squarely in the chest and he blasted into the air ; for a split second he seemed to hang suspended beneath the shining skull , and then he fell slowly backwards , like a great rag doll ,over the battlements and out of sight , and mission accomplished . " Out of here , QUICKLY " said snape as he seized Malfoy by the scruff of the neck and forced him through the door ahead of the rest death eaters , they kept running ; snape and Draco , both of them , till they found themselves in the middle of the battle . The big death eater had just fired off a hex that caused half the ceiling fall and also broke the curse blocking the stairs . Malfoy gazed at professor Lupin and Ginny Weasley across the hall then snape and the boy emerged out of the dust , both Lupin and Ginny let them passed, because they thought they were being chased by the death eaters , they helped them escape so easily , in front of their sight ; " It's over , time to go now " a half shout came from snape's voice ; and he disappeared round the corner at the far end of the corridor , he and Malfoy seemed to have forced their way through the fight unscathed .they kept running and soon they would be beyond the gates able to disparate , snape shouted, " Run DRACO !". Draco saw Harry screaming and running towards them , and then snape turned , twenty yards apart , " Incarc __ " shouted Potter , snape blocked the spell immediately ,with a fast move , Harry could see him sneering , pending this time, the Malfoy boy had vanished . Harry thought : _Malfoy had slipped past because of him _ and shouted angrily : " Why did you let him escape ??" ," This is really not you concern , Potter !" jeered snape . " Incarc ــــ" Harry roared , but snape deflected the spell with an almost lazy flick of his arm . |
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06-09-2007, 01:32 AM
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جزئييييين!!! OMG يشبه أمهم xD!!! لا والأخ من زود الثقة صك كل واحد فيهم ديتينشن xD أحس نارنيا فصل دراسي واحد مافيها xD! *تفكر تنتقل للعيش هناك* بيتر الغبي xD ليزارد XDXDXD
لول أجل جاء على حرب هوغورتس؟ مم.. لو كانوا معتبرينه طيب في ذلك الوقت P=!! مسكين فليتويك xD!! طول عمري أحب هالمدرس! completely harmless! الله يحفظه xD وصح! شيء طبيعي ان سنيب بيحمي دراكو بسبب الوعد! هاري الدلخ ما يقدر يسوي شيء xD!! سنيب اسهمه ارتفعت عندي بعد الفصل 33 من الكاتب السابع D+! انتظر التتمة! |
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06-09-2007, 02:16 PM
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خخخخخخخخخخ..يلا بس جزئين و نخلص!! و الأخير انزله باجر... -------------- Harry who was peering , jiggered , addled intellect , at snape's fast moves in blocking his charms , Harry roared again "Sectum ـــــ" , " POTTER !" screamed snape; "Draco, come on, where's the music?" yelled Voldemort at Malfoy. "Didn't I tell you to push the button?" ," Yes , but it's not working !" said Draco who was pressing the play button repetitively , Harry who couldn't curb his enthusiasm push Draco aside and said ;" You idiot ! , there is no tape in it, where is the cassette tape??" , Draco who had skipped the first humiliation word , and neglected Harry's attitude pulled the cassette tape from under his cloak and said " I forgot to inject the tape !" , Harry didn't wait and he gobbled the tape from Draco's hand and before he insert it, Voldemort shouted ; " Don't you dare use my own spell against me , Mark my words !" , " No , I'll kill you like what you did to professor Dumbledore and my parents , coward " screamed Harry in panic , " So , you're in dead line , Expellriamus ! " shouted snape and Harry was soaring backwards hitting the ground hard ,and his wand flew out of his hand . " Now come, we must leave, Potter belongs to the Dark Lord, we are to leave him,GO !GO !" Shouted snape at the twain death eaters behind Harry as the obeyed , in no time snape heard someone calling his name , the voice sounded familiar to him and he turned his head squinting at the dark neglecting Harry who was on his feet holding is wand ready to fight again. " What brings you here , Master ??" said snape wondering , " Is that how you welcome your Master , snape ??" , " Um , No but __" replied snape in puzzlement , " NO buts , there was a little changing in plans " . Snape opened his mouth, still confused and fuzzy, Harry who was staring at the man whispered "Voldemort!" Lord Voldemort noticed Harry who was shaking badly behind snape," Ah! , Harry it's so good to see you , how are you m' boy ??" , Voldemort hugged Harry and kissed him on both cheeks , Harry didn't say anything , he was totally shocked and thought : _What's happening?? first he wants to kill me and now !_ snape who was gazing at Harry furiously ,glanced from Harry to the Dark Lord and sneered " My Lord , what do you actually mean in changing In plans ?? didn't you want to kill both Dumbledore and Harry and destroy Hogwarts ?" . " WHAT !? , KILL , DESTROY ,Oh , no ,no ,no ,who said that …….. and now let's see where's that boy he's a little bit late " finished Voldemort , " What boy ??" asked snape who was still holding his wand and gazing at Harry ,Voldemort turned looking at snape and said calmly; " You'll see ! , and by the way where the heck is DD ??" ,snape looked at him in amazement and Harry thought _ Who's DD ??_ ," Oh , please ………Dumbledore !" said Voldemort , _ Now professor Dumbledore has a nickname ??!_ thought Harry again. " Oh , I see , I'm afraid to tell you that …I killed him " answered snape proudly , waiting for an encomium from his Master like : _ Great job , sporty ! OR ,This is the best thing you've ever done in your life with me, OR , you have gained the title of a Master of the Dark Arts, how can I reward you ....I could make my official assistant or my right hand _snape was expecting more encomium , but all he heard was ; " Oh , okay no problem we can unhand him , after all we didn't need him that much!.." sighed Lord Voldemort. " I'm HERE! " came a shout from behind them , it was a young boy's voice ; very familiar voice , " MALFOY !" whooped Harry . Draco was running in the dark trying to catch his lord on time , he was holding a large heavy stereo in his arms, No wonder why he'd be late and exhausted ! , " I fetched you what you'd asked me to bring my Lord " said Malfoy breathless beholding his Master , " Ah , well done , draco well done !, now let's get started " said voldemort acclaiming , snape wasn't sure about this whole changing in plans idea , he wondered if this was a joke , a silly one , he assigned his wand back to his pocket under his cloak . The twin brother said " Master , do you mean it ??" and his sister said hastily; "Are we going to have __" Yes , yes my Dear ! " answered Voldemort ," Thank you my Lord " Gasped the twin sister," I beg your pardon My Lord , but , we're ready for WHAT ?" puzzled snape ," Oh , snape don't be silly , have you forgotten , we're going to have a party ??" said the Dark Lord ," But you said after destroying Hogwarts !" replied snape , " Oh , how many times do I have to mention it , there was some changing __" . "In plans!" continued Harry, "Ah, you see now Mr. Potter is so excited, Draco push the button". Malfoy didn't care about Harry , he was soastonished and happy at the same time about the party thing , and he had completely forgotten about Harry and how much he hated him since the day he met him , anyway at the great hall all the students with their teachers were there Hermione and Luna arrived lately to the great hall after the battle ; and they both saw Ron and Ginny in their pajamas with professor Lupin ," We have to find Harry !" cried Hermione , " There is no one in the castle , everyone is here , how come he's not with you ??" Asked Ron " I don't know !?" replied Hermione . " Hey, did you s_____" said Ron . Hermione couldn't hear what Ron was saying because of the noise , echo and replication of all the sounds and voices of the students who was crying and scramming ,all the professors tried tocomfort them , but it was no use ; they thought it's the end , they will die . " SILENCE ………" came a deep strong shout from someone and within a second thecalmness, quiet , quiescence and serenity spread to thewhole suspense of the hall . Hermione gazed at the old man who was standing in front of the gate's hall and she smiled warmly at him and thought ; _ he's always at the right place in the right time _ . " Wait , there is something missing !" and he stared at the dark sky pulling his wand and waved it directly to the sky and muttered with a spell that snape didn't hear it well ,then in a few seconds he was dazzled with bright lights shining , glittering , flaming , sparkling and glistening in the sky like a fireworks , both Harry and Draco gasped observing the beautiful sky which was dotted with gleaming and glazing stars , the twin brother said whispering : " Is that a massage or what ??" , " indeed , I want to invite all the students in the school " replied Voldemort . snape gazed at the shining sky smiling and whispered : "JION US AND ENJOY !", "LET'S HIT THE PARTY !" , snape didn't move , he kept staring at the sky neither admitting nor accepting that his Master , the most powerful wizard is acting like that ,he wondered if he got crazy , mad , manic ,queer, insane or jerky, there is no way he could qualify this awful thoughts ; supposes it's true ! what could he do ? smack him down to recover his lost mind….??. Snape glanced from the two boys and the twin death eaters to Lord Voldemort , he couldn't say anything , he just kept waiting for someone to interrupt and tell the truth about his Master being insane, after a three seconds came a noise beyond the castle's gate , snape recognized that all the students gathered to celebrate the party with Voldemort after they had red the shiny ongoing massage in the gloomy sky , " Ah , wonderful , what do you think snape , am I clever ..??" asked the Dark Lord ." No comment !" snape answered in an ennui voice ,Draco immediately actuated the stereo and all the attendance ejaculated the moment they heard the music ,the randy, loud music Made everyone prancing , dancing and singing , even Potter and Malfoy were dancing and singing , everyone were rebounding the lyrics with the Female singer as she said ; Oh baby, baby , was I supposed to know Oh baby, baby , I shouldn't have let you go Tell me baby cuz I need to know My loneliness is killing me ( and I ) I must confess I still believe ( still believe) Give me a sign Hit me baby one more time ! Snape was so confused and he felt dizzy of all that noise and murmured, " Britney spears ?? Are they kidding me ??" . Hermione , Ginny and Ron found Harry and they all danced together with Draco ,of course . Voldemort was singing too and he heard someone screaming his name and he turned , " DD my old pal !! where have you been?? , aren't you dead ??" gasped Voldemort hugging his old pal professor Dumbledore , " Well , I'm not dead, someone we know didn't spell the charm right , he was stupid " laughed Dumbledore deeply and so as Voldemort ,snape heard them talking and he was so surprised to see the headmaster alive , he thought that he was suspecting , or that old man might be a ghost , snape jumped and screamed loudly ; " How come you're alive , I killed you ??" , Dumbledore laughed again and said nearly sneering at snape " When will you learn snape??, you didn't spell the words right , you said Avata not Avada so because of that silly mistake you made , I collapsed for awhile ." "I did not, inarticulate, dummy old man," yelled snape. "You did to, I heard you, I'm sure of it," explained Dumbledore. "Did not," "Did to," "Did not," "Did to," "Could you please stop yelling, that is no one's fault, let's have a good time and forget about that for a while, Deal?" Voldemort interrupted to stop the fight and he took Dumbledore away and left snape behind ,snape's part ended here ; he couldn’t do anything There was no mission to succeed , nothing to do except dancing and having fun with a bunch of morons he'd always hated. He looked there and there everyone was dancing, Draco with Harry and his annoying Friends, Crabb and Goyle , pansy with Luna , professor McGonagall was dancing with professor Lupin, Lord Voldi (or that what snape called him , after he knew that his Master is nothing but a total GEEK ) with DD , snape's foe; it's just like watching a horror movie , loud music and shrill songs fill all over the place , overset , botheration and nuisance everywhere, snape thought :_ How could they dace without getting tired , and why didn't they change their pajamas, I have to get some rest , or I'll lose my mind _ it was midnight , for so many people this is the best time for celebrating , but the students didn't have time to change their pajamas , that's the funny thing . snape stepped backwards and he screamed loudly , though no one heard him , and he collapsed on the wet grass. *~*~* |