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31-08-2007, 08:02 PM
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| أول فكشنhp أنجليزيه أكتبها...(بليييز قولو لي رايكم فيها) السلام عليكم.. شلونكم شخباركم يا أعضاء المنتدى , حبيت انزل أول fan faction أسويها بحياتي وأهم شي انها انجليزيه خخخخخ وانا راح احطها على جزئين لأن النهايه سويتها بس ما مداني اكتبها على ال word واتمنى من اللي يدخلون عالموضوع يقرونها كااااااااااامله قبل لا يردون واللي ما له خلق يقراها بعدين لما يفضي عالعموم راح اقولكم اختصار القصه , أول شي أنا لمن فكرت بالأحداث اختر شخصيات من جم روايه اول شي اخذت)الشخصيه الرئيسيه)severus snape من روايه هاري بوتر مالت j .k rowling وبعد جم شخصيه فرعيه منها السحته هاري بوتر و دراكو مالفوي , لورد فولدمورت , بروفسور فليتويك و وشوي من dearth eaters . وثاني شي 3 شخصيات من ريزدنت ايفل (شينجي ميكامي ) كلير وجيل وستيف ولا انسى ضيوف الشرف الزومبيز...وهمن روايه نارنيا (c.s. lowicis ) the witch the lion the wardrobeأخذت منها الملكه او الساحره جاديس و أسلان( الأسد المليغ) وأخوان الاربعه بيتر و سوزان , لوسي وادموند و القندس اللي معاهم وحصان اسمه فيليب (موجود بالفليم) وأخر شي من روايه سيد الخواتم ( j.r.r toliken) اخذت بيبن وغاندالف وهمن الأوركس ( الوحوش ) المهم يمكن راح تفهمون شوي من اسم القصه Find your scene , severus snape ! المهم اختصار القصه... سنيب راح يضيع وكل ساع والثاني يدش عالم غريب ويحاول يرد لبيته ....اتمنى انها تعجبكم ولو ان كتابتي بدائيه وهمن المفردات اللي استخدمها قديمه وان شاء الله ما تطولون ولا تملون لمن تقرونها.........والأهم بلييز قولوا لي رايكم.... وانا بالانتظار على أحر من الجمر. ***** Find your scene, Severus Snape! Disclaimer:The characters and settings portrayed here are the creation of J.K Rowling, Shinji Mikami and C.S Lewis, also JRR Tolkien, and are used here solely for the amusement of myself and others. Sunday night was cold and rainy. The wind was blowing blindly in the darkness, noisily passing by the windows and the bricks of the walls of Spinner's End. Only one room inside the house was not pledged with darkness, as a pool of dim light cast by candle-filled lamp that hung from the ceiling shone out through the window. The room had simple wooden furniture and its walls were completely covered with books, most of them bound in old black or brown leather. In a dark corner of the room, in an old armchair sat a man with a long black hair parted in curtains around a sallow face, a dim light dancing in his black eyes. The man got to his feet and strode to a small window, peering through the curtains at the deserted street soaked in pools of water. Then, with a jerk of his hand, he closed the window. The man returned to his place by the armchair. On a nearby table, there were two books of the ancient texts of the Dark Arts. He picked them up and returned them into a shelf above the fireplace. Then, Severus Snape took out an envelope from his robe, and after adding some more woods to the fire, he sat back down and scanned the content of the letter. "Hogwarts," he said grumpily. "The Ministry of Magic, this year would be so exciting." he continued coldly "More defense against the Dark Arts ...the safety of the school in November...the Dark Lord's return… Oh, what a stupid Minster!" Severus folded the letter and threw it carelessly at the small table next to him. "Tomorrow would be a long day, my first day at Hogwarts," said Severus Snape. "There are lots of things to do… with so little time." He sighed and closed his eyes. And in no time, Severus fell asleep.      |
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01-09-2007, 07:25 PM
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السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته سيفيرس.. *sighs*
الجزء كان جداً قصير :(! وضيعني شوي.. إذا كان هاري بوتر و الشلة مولودين .. كيف يكون أول يوم له في هوجورتس؟ قصدك الوظيفة؟ على كل الوصف عجبني بشكل عام, عرفتي تجيبين الجو العاصف و تفاعل سنيب البارد معاه. متحمسة أشوف لقاءه مع الزومبيات xD أحسه بيفكرهم inferie xD!! بس كيف تجيبين ببين من غير ميري؟ ما ينفع xD!! مم أحس أني لازم أمشي>_>... بالتوفيق! |
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02-09-2007, 03:01 AM
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تسلمين عالمرور العسل ليلي... و هاذي تكملة الفكشن.. و على طاري الجكر هااري..أنا بروحي أكرهه *********** "Who's there?" said someone from the corner behind the table, a unique typewriter, some ribbon and items were left on the small table, at the other side of the tiny dark corridor stood a man, and he couldn't see the person who was shouting because the corridor was dark, he heard foot steps moving slowly toward him, as fast as he can, held his wand, and felt something was pointing behind his head, a GUN, he was late and he turned his face and there stood a women, breathless, fritted, her hands were shaking "You are not zombie?" said the women softly, he smiled and replied "What zombie?". "Shut up, who do work for?" she shouted at him angrily. _Man she's a tough young Woman, _ "Hey, hey, take it easy, I won't harm you," He said quietly planning to run away before she would try to kill him, but instead of thinking about that silly plan he walked two steps backwards so that he could see her more closely, and maybe kill her before she has the courage and the chance to do it. "Stop, what's your name?" she said as she was pointing her gun to shoot him if he tries to attack her _ just in case_. "Severus Snape," said he, "and yours?!" "Claire , Claire Redfield," and Claire rose her lighter from her pocket, the flame from her lighter wasn't enough to see Snape, she realized that he was not very close to her because she told him to stop at where he stood. "Could you come closer to me, so I can see you?" she said in a sweet voice; he had walked slowly to face her as she told him to do, when she saw him she thought: _oh, he looks weird in these black clothes, he doesn't seems to be a secret agent for Umbrella, _ "What are you doing in this place, Mrs. Redfield? "He interrupted her thoughts, when he saw her staring at him so strangely, like if he was a stranger from another planet, and he gave her a faint smile to comfort her. "I'm looking for my brother, and you?" She let down her gun and felt safe. "First of all, where are we?" said Snape, "We are on an island, surrounded with zombies," she walked towards the stairs which leadto the first floor, so that she could get out of the dark creepy dungeon, he followed her. "How did you find your way here?" She was asking him in a calm voice, when she opened the iron door. "I remember falling asleep, and the next thing I know… I was HERE, maybe I was dreaming!" his voice coming behind her; the chill of the dark corridor behind him pressed at his back like an icy hand but still he hesitated. "Maybe you are …" said Claire as she opened the door and "Agaaahhhhhhh" There was flames outside, an explosion that assaulting their ears, two men fell from the burning helicopter near the prison's gate, Claire opened her mouth as she wanted to say –RUN- but it was too late, they were at a burning Cemetery, zombies –Muhhhhhhh- screaming walking towards them, _Is this is a prison or a cemetery? _ thought Snape, the soft, pitiful, unmistakable moan inspiring a near panic of action; she saw the first one stumbling towards her. His hair and clothes on fire, the skin of his face blistering and black, She walked and saw more of the dead men crawling up from the mud their faces a sickening gray-white, their skeletal fingers grasping in her direction, clutching air as they reeled towards her. -What are they? - Snape thought he didn't have time for disbelief or dismay. Claire pushed two of the hungry zombies, and said " Run for your life Snape, or else they will eat you alive," she was running to reach the front gate, Snape stood in the middle, zombies walking toward him –Muuhhh- the sound of the moan made him panic and freeze in his spot, but he heard Claire's voice calling him, "MOVE," and he raised his wand from his pocket and he shouted. "Sectumsempra "A tongue of red flame which shoot from Snape's wand had smashed the zombies into little pieces, Claire turned and her face glowed red from the blaze of the flame; and she heard the crashing sound behind her. "Snape, he needs my help!" she whispered to her self and raised her gun, and __ -BANG - BANG- BANG, she shoots five zombies, it was raining hardly, Snape and Claire stood there watching the bodies of the zombies covered with blood and mud, there's no one left in the cemetery; it was Dark and cold, they barely realized that they were freezing, there clothes were so wet. "How… what was that?" said Claire staring at the wand, "Oh, it's magic," he answered simply. "How do you use it?" she looked directly to his eyes in amazement. "I suppose with wands," said Snape ironically. "This is unbelievable," said Claire, "I am a wizard, after all," answered Snape proudly, "Hmmm, magic, I think we should keep going," said Claire as she opened the gate. "What the …?" he said in a weird voice, and Claire turned her face, "What is it Snape, Snape?" said Claire when she found out that Snape was gone, he disappeared. |
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02-09-2007, 04:11 AM
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هالجزء خطييييير!! حسيت كأني من جد ألعب ريزيدنت ايفل!! << شيء ما يحصل في الواقع لأني متعقده منه و من شريط قديم على بلايستشن1 اسمه: Dr.D ... أذكر مرة حاولت و جربت ألعبه لوحدي,, ليس تماماً, أجبرت بنت خالتي انها تجلس معي و تشجعني xD!!<<< ولا كملتها.... مم كفاية استطراد! القصة!!
typical snape xD!!!!
وصح هو يقدر يقرأ الأفكار *سنيب يضربها* "من قال لك ان العقل كتاب علشان.." تقاطعه ليلي: تكفى أسكت, والله اني قارية الكتاب وعارفة كل حواراتك =_=! مرة ثانية, أرجع للقصة و أقول ان تصويرك لعالم RE و تفاعل سنيب فيه كان ممتاز! أنتظر LOTR!! |
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02-09-2007, 10:28 PM
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شكراً لتواصلج معاي ليلي.. و الله شجعتيني أكمل .... *~*~* "Agggaaahhh," Shouted Snape, when he saw a flash light that dazzled him for a second and he closed his eyes, till he heard voices and quickly opened it, he was standing in the middle of a field, a large white field, he stared at a weird tree, behind it there was a gate, this looks like a white castle built within a mountain, the gate was opened, Snape turned his face and was shocked when he saw a burning man running towards him screaming, shouting painfully. And the man fell from the roof to the bottom of the ground, Snape followed him and looked down, he was at the top of the castle, and there was a huge army in front of the castle's gate, in fact they were monsters, Snape thought for a second, "This is a war!" "And that is the end of GONDOR'S king." said an old man who stood behind Snape, he was a tall old man, wearing white robes, holding a white Staff, his eyes were blue, he had a long white hair, and a long white bushy eyebrows, that stuck out beyond the brim of his forehead. and he stood there gazing at Snape's face wondering. Where did he come from because he doesn't seem to be one of Gondor's people. "Who are you?" said the old man. "My name is Severus Snape," replied Snape coldly. "Oh, and what are you doing in the middle of this war?" said the old man. "I am …" said Snape, and stopped when he heard a voice behind the old man shouting, "Gandalf, quick, the orcs are coming!" said a young boy, Snape thought _This kid reminds me of the sick Potter _"And that kid might be?" said Snape, "I'm not a kid, I'm a hobbit!" said the short young boy, "A hobbit!" Snape looked at him, "His name is Pippin," Gandalf finally said. Pippin had a blue bright eyes, red cheeks and a brown thick curly hair, he didn't ware shoes since his feet had tough leathery soles and were clad in thick curling hair, much like the hair in his head; he was wearing a royal black dress with black robes. "Where am I exactly?" said Snape staring at Gandalf, as an orc attacked Gandalf and quickly raised his wand and smashed the orc. "That was close!" both Pippin and Gandalf said, "Huh, you are a wizard?" sneered Snape, "Yes, I am indeed," answered Gandalf. "I'm a wizard, too," replied Snape as he raised his wand, to prove to Gandalf that he was a real wizard. "Well, show us some thing!" said Pippin laughing, nearly jeering at Snape's face, when a bunch of orcs were climbing the roof to reach the gate of the white castle. and Snape thought it's the perfect time _ "Expellriamus" and the orcs were smashed into pieces, falling to the ground, Snape turned his face and looked at Pippin and Gandalf with the look that says: _SEE, I'M THE BEST_ "Very impressive Mr. Snape, come you could help," said Gandalf grabbing Snape's hand, and Pippin give him the look, that says _ NO , LEAVE HIM, DON'T FORGET ABOUT FRODO _ Gandalf didn't care, and carried Pippin and said: "Follow me Snape!" , "Please, Professor Snape!" said Snape sardonically, Gandalf looked at him as Snape stood proud of himself, and thought : _Idiot...!_ they were going down stairs to the battle, "So , you are a dark wizard!" said Gandalf while he was attacking some orcs, snape thought _he wants to show me that he is tough , I can be more better than you old man _ "As a matter of fact, yes I am!" answered Snape, not paying attention for Pippin, who said "HELP ME! ". "I want to tell you that the uruk-hai is more ... " Replied Gandalf, as he couldn't finish his sentence, and in no time jumped an uruk-hai on Snape's back holding a sharp Axe, they both fell to the ground and Snape with an excellent move rolled to the other side And got on his feet quickly. "What the hell is that, Agggahhh "shouted Snape, when the uruk-hai had thrown his Axe but he missed Snape," You should prong him in the heart, so you could kill him" answered Gandalf. "You mean just jab him, Why didn't you say that before, you filthy old man." Replied Snape in a low voice, while he was trying to move the uruk-hai away when he attacked him with a small knife, "WHAT?!" Exclaimed Gandalf, not hearing Snape because all the noise that came from the Orcs. "Never mind!" Snape wasn't ready for a fight, so he squalled as fast as he could, "Crucio". Snape heard screams, cries, howl, clamor everywhere and everything turned black and thought: _Did I killed that oro, okai, oko...or what ever his name is..!??_ No one was there, he was alone in the shadows, and after a while of silence he found himself in a great hall with awindow; on the wall near a broken window there was a big picture of two young twins who owned this mansion, a boy and a girl with a shiny silky blond hair as their skin was white, Snape stared at the picture for a few seconds and turned his faced to observe the hall. There were INCREDIBLE decorations all over the floor and the walls that showed the good taste of the owners, on the right side were stairs which leads to the iron gate of the large hall. Snape squinted at the sized statues of knights lining the heavily shadowed walls. "I have a bad feeling about this gate," Snape whispered to himself, and turned to the other side of the hall and saw a door with odd and creepy shapes painted on it, suddenly the iron gate was opened by someone _ it couldn't be a zombie ! _ he thought, someone stood there and shouted in the shadows," Who …SNAPE!" Snape recognized the voice though it was a little shade, and he knew the person very well it was … "Mrs. Redfield," said Snape softly. "You don't look happy to see me, am I right Snape?" said Claire with a sweet smile and she came running towards him. "Please, Professor Snape!" replied Snape, and he stared at her. "Oh, so first you are a wizard and now …a teacher?" said Claire with a sweet smile, Snape turned to the iron door and said to Claire coldly "I'm a dark wizard and a teacher, in Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry, and DO NOT MESS WITH ME young lady!", Claire didn't take the last sentence seriously, "And where is that howga, hoow-la thing or whatever its name was..!", laughed Claire and thought: _ ….Is he making fool of me?_ "It would be in the wizarding world Mrs. Redfield" Turned Snape to face her, and said gazing at Claire as if he saw a bug, "Could you SHUT your mouth, or I'll SHUT IT with a CURSE, do you understand my words Mrs. Redfield?" he stared at her not blinking, He looked serious when he yelled at her, she felt the flames in his eyes and thought – if I Didn't shut my bloody mouth , he will for sure turn me into a mouse _ She nodded at him with _sir, yes sir_ face, she rose her hand as to say _ please ,Am I allowed to speak_ , "Very well, what do you want from me now?" said Snape in a calm voice, " Sna__Imean Professor Snape, did you see a boy called Steve, he is tall, with a short brown hair an he is holding golden guns!" said Claire politely. "I didn't met any one called S__", and Snape couldn't finish, when they heard some one jumped into the hall by crashing the window, both Snape and Claire said … "What the hell is that monster!", And after a while Claire recognized the monster, it was "No, Steve STOP!" Claire shouted, as Steve was holding an Axe covered with blood. "Well that Steve monster finds you!" Sneered Snape, Claire opened her eyes widely disbelieving what happened to Steve, and cried "RUN, HE WILL ATTACK US …!" She was running as fast as she can crying for all she was worth, Steve the monster opened his mouth and roared; he came after them, chasing them Swinging the massive Axe, the sharp edge whistling through the air, Snape and Claire both could feel the wind from the swinging blade, Claire some how found more speed, her legs pumping, pushing her faster. Snape followed her slowly, she turned and said to Snape "WATCH IT!" Snape dodged the first attack, and the second, "Bloody monster, I will finish you!" said Snape cursing, and he jumped as fast as he could near the western window and shouted "Sectumsempra!" Steve fell on the ground covered with blood that spurted from his chest, and his pale face as though he had been slashed with an invisible sword, Claire turned her face to see Steve lying on the dirty floor." STEVE….NOOooo..." Claire, practically screaming his name, she hurried and pushed Snape aside and hugged Steve and cried "You killed him, you murderer!" She screamed, and raised her tear-stained red face, "You should thank me for saving you …or you'll be in dead line," said Snape lazily, looking at her crying near the blood-covered body of the monster. "You killed him," she yelled at his face. "That monster is dangerous!", shouted Snape, "Fine, I'm going, there is no use of being here watching you crying, " said Snape, with the faintest sneer, he left Claire with Steve who became in a few seconds human again, "No, wait don't leave me alone!" Claire shouted after she had changed her mind, "Why don't you stay with the monster?" said Snape curtly staring at Steve. For a short time he looked at her innocent baby face, and said "Okay, you could come, but do not disturb me!" Claire nodded as for _Okay, Daddy I'll be good and polite from now on!_ She followed Snape looking at Steve for the last time, they opened the Iron Gate and walked for so long, she kept silence as Snape ordered her, but she finally said : "So, where are we going?" Snape thought: _bloody female, can't be quiet for the rest of the hour _ "I have No idea!" said Snape to her with _shut your mouth _ look, Claire didn't understand and continued, "So you are a real wizard?", "Do you mind shutting your bloody mouth for just a second, so I could know which WAY ARE WE GOING!", snarled Snape in a loud voice. "I shouldn't come with you," muttered Claire. "Well, you shouldn't, you are too noisy," murmured Snape with a hummer voice, Claire opened her mouth as to say something … "You bastard!" she whispered to herself in a low voice, what's that you said?" turned Snape to her. "Nothing I'm just saying …" answered Claire calmly, "Hmmm, cleaver girl," sneered Snape in a low voice. After 2 hours of walking they ushered a Dark wood, "Snape we are going in circles!" Said Claire hopelessly. Snape didn't answer," Come on should I every time call you Professor! " still NO response from Snape, "Oh man, okay , AHHEEMM, Professor Snape I'm tired, hungry, and I have to rest for a while…!" said Claire hoping that Snape would reply, "I don't feel my legs, my bones hurt me!" _OH GOD , I HAVE TO DO SOMETHING _ She thought as she fell to the ground and "AAAHHH!", shouted Claire, "I broke my ankle!", finally Snape turned and stared at her "Don't make me laugh, get up there's a castle 2 miles away from here, we could rest there!", Snape held Claire's hand, and said To her "GET UP!" she obeyed, and walked slowly behind him, "You should walk faster, so we could reach the front gate of the castle before midnight," ,finished Snape, as he began to race her, " My legs hurt me, Man didn't you get tired by now?", Claire said as she hardly spelled the word because of the pain in her legs, __WOW, how did he knew that there's a castle , does he have a telescope in his eyes !? what a weird MAN_ she thought lowering her eyebrows, half an hourhad passed, and they finallyreached the castle's gate, Claire sat on a broken garden chair near the front gate, "You own me an apology, MASTER SNAPE!" said Claire with a smile, "Why should I, all the time you were complying about your leg!" said Snape in a clam voice. "At least you don't h…", Claire couldn't finish her sentence, as Snape shouted "DON'T MAKE ANY MOVE!" Claire was shocked, and turned her face slowly behind her to see a small yellow-reddish eyes between the trees, staring at both of them, she screamed and jumped offthe chair to Snape's back, the thing started to move and came out from the trees it was, "A DOG!" shouted Claire "ABNORMAL creature!" , replied Snape, they stepped backwards to get passed the gate fast, "ON the count of the threewe RUN" whispered Snape, Claire nodded, "ONE,TWO,THREE ,RUN ," shouted Claire and they opened the gate together and closed it behind them, Claire took a several deep breaths, and said : "Wheeeee, That was close, isn't it Snape …SNAPE!" again, Snape disappeared like he wasn't there in the first place. |